After my analytical essay with Maroo of the Winter Caves, I have realized that I need to improve on the Mara Daughter of the Nile analytical essay by editing a few mistakes and by repeating some of the things that helped improve my grade. A few of my paragraphs were not elaborate enough. This time I will elaborate the paragraphs more. I also need to order the quotes from either chronological order, or order of importance. Although I had a few errors, I still had a few things that were correct on the essay. One of these was my choice in quotes. I was able to pick the right quotes for supporting the thesis. Next time, I will work harder with working on my essays.
There are many things that I need to improve, but there are many things that I mastered on my Maroo of the Winter Caves essay. Two main things I need to improve are, I need to make my paragraphs longer in my essays by adding more details and the other improvement I need to make is I have to elaborate more in my essays. Also I have one thing that I did well which is that I had a good thesis statement which stated everything that was going to be in all three of my paragraphs. Those are some improvements I need to make and one thing I did well. I will remember these things that I need to do better for my next analytical essay.
In a book that I am currently reading called The Bronze Bow there are many important characters, and there are many minor characters, for example. A boy named Daniel bar Jamin is the main character in the book he is full of hatred toward the Romans. His friend, Joel bar Henson, is also filled with hatred toward the Romans. Daniel and Joel both have sisters; Daniels sister is named Leah, and Joel’s sister is named Thacia. Another important character in the book is Jesus; Jesus plays an important role in the book The Bronze Bow. If you want to find out how then read the book The Bronze Bow.
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